On the offence thing, it depends on the reader...Necro had his reasons to take offence (well kind of)..whilst others didn't...but it's apparent in so much 'art'...so it's all good in one way or the other..

...the piece was strong, you came simple, strong and raw...i actually felt you used 'Hitler' kind of well..cos of what you understand of him, you relate to and draw comparisons with your boyfriend...

...nice piece, resp...

PS

Don't need to choose your words more carefully, as long as it's within context and not stupidifingly non relative....this piece was neither of those things i mentioned....