u see potential cuz creepin on ah come up is written, its bone, let me look thru the rest of ur ryhme....

aight theres no other bites in it, buut the ryhme in itself is, well, 4/10, not the werst not the best, not really average either, but ur a newie, i can tell by tyhe broken flo, u have odd line ryhmes [1-3-5-7 werds that ryhme] it just doesnt sound right, maybee it sounds good audio, but i give it a 4/10