yeah man, If I heard it the way you would say it... then it would probably have a better flow... but from how I read it... the flow was a bit off... yah know...
Yo what can I say... I like the energy in your rhymes... that ventin' stuff really comes out... likes there's a good amount of feeling in this... but I thought I was a bit simple at some points... and some parts sounded pretty nice... "....yo the tears drop outta the pen/
and again, the ink spills my pent/" I liked the way this was started... good metas....
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