this is mindboggling to me. i grasp your ideas with the scales tip and where ya were going with it. ya let alot of emotion talk for you in this. but the imagery seemed alil dry. like when you were speaking about the war of babylon ya should ve described what the opposing side looked like. had sum great one liners threw out. specially the opening bar. never talking down and keep em cuming.

peace

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