i wrote this for my girl fon our one year, i need some feedback before it comes up so i be sure it is any good. So any criticism would be great thanks.

I PROMISE
i promise you my love
i promise you my heart
i promise you my life
i promise we'll never be apart

i promise not to hurt you
i promise to never make you cry
i promise to always trust you
i promise not to lie

i promise you forever
i promise you tonight
i promise you my respect
i promise to do things right

i promise to always be there
i promise until the end
i promise to always love you
i promise to be your best friend

i promise you my love
i promise you my life
i promise you forever
i promise our love is my life

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