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Old 04-21-03, 08:19 AM   #10
Orikle
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Tight, very tight, you both have good wording but missing hard hittin punches, I'm givin it to Roux simply for punches, both were equal in the wordplay and that but Roux just takes it with these punches;

"blunt like your mind dull rusty and gone//
if your words were stolen good you got nothin to pawn
fucked up canuck not crunk just junk//
if you was a navy your fleet i sunk
like missin monopoly money you got no "game"//
pre written rhymes that shits a shame
probably sittin at home on dad's laptop//
lookin for porn an you made a pitstop"

Those lines there took it out and came hard..
Vote = Roux

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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