i kinda caught the flow a lil but yeah just put it in bar form, once im able to read it properly then i can help you out a lil!
and try not to use niggas so much , it's not cause im white it's just it fucks the rhyme up when u say it alot try and expand ur vocab , god knows i still got a lot of work to do wit mine cause i dont have the best choice of words either sometimes, but keep it up cuz ye'll get the hang of it! one