never fails, u always drop somthin with mad flow and metas and subject that 90% of every 1 here will never understand
i like it, i think it really shows off ur skill, not just ur vocab, but ur ability to make great metaphores.
the only thing is, i had to read this about 10 times till i was satisfied i figured out what u were trying to say. ur rhymes would be great for an english class to disect and try and figure out, but as for a rap song, i think its over too many ppl's heads. if u came with something more...raw... next time, somthin that just goes to the point and is exactly what u think str8 from tha heart that every1 here can feel, then ud have a lot of ppl flabbergasted by tha power of ur rhymes.
just a thought