i like your idea of how you wanted this to come out

but....you sampled a very poplar drum....that was the lauren hill thing with marley's son or whatever.....

so each time i heard it, thats all i thought of was how good the original one sounded ya know...

you blended the other guitar sample pretty well...but it was off completely at points....learn to slow it down or speed it up a tad know what i mean

not bad, real good job for your first beat man

take it easy