Middle Weight
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IP:
Seems like you have a mix between El-P and Aesop Rock.
And this piece shows evidence of both of their styles, somewhat. But maybe that's just me. Either way, it's your piece, your style. And it's a pretty damn good piece at that.
The imagery was nonetheless marvelous and I could picture in my mind many of the things being described in here:
"i saw the call of the ancients,mustered the patientence//
delivered the exact map refrence intact,and blasted abstract//
armoured cats,flacking,jacking mesiahs behind ya,postin fliers//
optics twisited in half with pliers,infinite,deifinite,intricate//
sown into the fabric of the desolate desolation of the illest shit//
spillin this twisting it and fillin sifts,volumes now floating//
cats is choking on the smoking gun found in the back of the capsule//"
^^Wonderful opener, and it just reallt drew me into wanting to read the piece further. Unlike those "gangsta" pieces in which I read the first three words and quickly hit the back button disappointed. The length didn't seem to bother me at all, it seemed fit for this piece.
Good work, I will look foward to the next written you will grace the board with, this was a treat to read and I must thank you
for that.
Again, everything went perfectly together. The flow, the rhyme scheme, the content, the vocabulary: A truly beautiful piece.
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