great drop.
long but like muhthugga said it suited it

the flow was the best part of the enitre text, i never skipped a beat reading it, it just kept me going right to the end

i felt ur chorus or hook or whatever u call the starting part that repeated, felt to me like u were facin desisions u have to make, but i donno thats just what i thought

above us the buzzards hover hoping for us to suffer the harse conditions of the desert summer//
and plummet into a deep abyss of unparalled width in wich we never surface again,our eye balls pick//
out the sockets,brainwaves launchin sky rockets,subliminal messaging into the photos in the lockets//

great lines, great flow, it just smoothly rolls off my toungue when i read it, and good imagry, def felt