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IP:
Again, I am enjoying all of the pieces I read from you.
Marvelous in concept, delivered brilliantly, and flowed flawlessly.
The title in itself had a clever pun in it: Reign Drops. Heh.....
but the piece itself was wonderful to read....the imagery was outstanding.....
"Governing A Crumbling Empire From Tha Voice Of An Inaudible..
Unheard Of In Tha Manner That His Own Actions Talk To You..
Raised Through A Distorted Image, His Flowchart Already Planned..
He Cant Control His Own Mind, How Is He Supposed To Rule Land?.."
^^^I just love those lines....some of my favorite lines ever read.....
Again, this was a wonderful piece that I enjoyed reading very much. Keep up the good work, this one showed your true skill.
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