theres something off with this....its like hesitating to come in.....
are u using loops?
and if so...is the bpm correct? on fruity loops...
it sounds like u are using a drum loop at say 90bpm (i duno)...and a guitar loop also at 90 bpm....but fruity is set on like 91 bpm...lol...so thers that one beat thats makin it sound retarted...
fix that...
and simply putting a guitar loop on a drum loop is not creative man....
.pz.