Okay... There's only one problem that I see here... Almost everyone here does it. They don't space their lines out properlly..

Like this:
catch you 25 years, planneinn n strategy, got to know who u enemys be, stock up on the heat, roll on em with energy

Can turn into this:
Catch you 25 years, plannin' n strategy//
Got to know who u enemys be//
Stock up on the heat and roll on em with energy//

It's all in the presentation. Sometimes someone writes something dope, but it loses votes because the people can't read it properly... No offense. I used to do it too.

Anyway. It's good, I like it.