It was a little hard to understand you at the begining but it came in better after a while.........
for such an emotional song you should have given a little bit more emotion....but the lyrics are really good and deep.....Beat is tight.....I like the Chorus its a different sound but i like it.........The Female voice ya shoulda had that more than what you did.......I Liked the end of the song with the SAm Jackson line..
OVERAL: 7.8/10 not bad, keep elevatin'......