yeah. The venting works... so it's ridiculous to finetune at this point.
But I'd say that it is a good self-examination -- or start to one anyway.
...that's the good thing about being a writer....you can act, write and realize you were wrong. You beat yourself up a bit in this one so I'd say you should examine both relationships...
a bro is a bro.... but a heart is a heart...
just don't get your dick mixed up with your heart.

Peace

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