^^^...BreakDown...TS style...

"I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary//
You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully"...

You Opened With A played Bar...But Then Finished It Up Nicely With The MJ Joint...

"Theres a method to my madness but I haven't figured it yet//
Your minds in the clouds like a 7 foot russian space cadet"...

Not Bad...Coulda ReWorded It A Lil...Still Not Bad Wordplay...

"I'll terminate you like your Internet provider//
with more deadly intent than those kids from Colorado"...

So So...Might Fly Over Some Heads...

"Hit You with a table and chair call me the chairman of the boards//
I'll leave you strung out on rap like I was spittin guitar chords"...

Not Bad Again...Point Made...Prolly The Best Coupla Bars In Ya Verse...


"Don't care whut your name means and its only fair//
Cuz in my win column there'll just be a number there//
Please don't get defensive and bad mouth me//
cuz this aint JerrY Springer, Steve can't help you B..."

Pretty Much Filler Material...Kinda Simple...Jerry Is Played...

"I'm comparing you to a game on my Atari system//
so I can say you played out before anybody listened..."

ReWorded and A Lil More Thought...You Coulda Killed Em With Those Bars...

"I'm like a cheat sheet I come correct//
My words are hot even when I'm doin a mic check//
Bring you back to '92 kid Protect yo neck//"

Really didn't Finish Up To Strong...If AnyThing...You Want To Make A Statement With Ya Opening and Closing Bars...Keep Ya Readers Attention...

Jus TS'z 2 Cents...