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*~John Doe~* a.k.a "My Father" (The Letter)
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04-24-03, 03:25 PM
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varentao
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Nicely done...
...really flowed effortlessly at times...emotions just came through strong and true...
...good imagery too, you used that fairly well...well written for sure...
i could give critique...but aint in the mood for it..
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varentao