This was good. There was a lot in there, some has been touched on, a lot not... I'll just mention a couple things...
At first it seems quite hopeless to be honest... intriguing all the same.

I was interested in how you used physical and philosophical truths as a main tool in this piece. (time, the sky, gravity, etc.)-- in concept, were all repeated. this worked well in highlighting the "tipping of the scales."

If you have not already thought about this interesting coincidence in your piece I'd ask you to consider....
that in your 1st stanza Life slowly sinking in the sands of babylon
and in your second I see the tears fall,
and third The fat man is drowning forever more
...so... life is sinking in the sand, and the fat man is drowning in water....and the tears are falling.
Very interesting in thought as water is a symbol for life (purity) and it is drowing the sinner. As sand - a mere product of evolution that does not contribute to growth, drowns the life. I just found that interesting...I really liked it in fact.

So I see this not so much as taking a stand... but rather recognizing the fact that one truth is a terrible hard thing to find.

[/i]Corruption meets epic destruction
In the last battle of times clashing[/i]
^^last battle.... that will never happen...not in this situation anyway... almost seemed satiric...I like that.

The fat man is drowning forever more
Whilst hanging on sheep,
to drag down too...
^^^This was phenominal, I loved this segment.

nice work.... look forward to some more shit.... I'd also like to know how conscious you were of that stuff while you were writing it.
Peace

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