okay....i hope I can figue this out so it works:::::::::::::::::

Setting the scene:::::::::::::::::
Joe's a construction worker::: Its a hot summer day and Joe has drank alot of water
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Bottle after bottle Joe drowned without question...
Constantly quenching thirst until his body made a suggestion/

"Release Me....Relive Me of this Stress"

But to reach his destination Joe needed to cross what seemed like a mountain...
Now he's wishing he wasn't working on the floor where they just installed the fountain/

*Sounds of POURING water in the background*

Making his way down the floors...he uneasily steps...
hoping not to disturb Nature and release his breath/
the closer he gets to his goal the higher the stress...
full to the brim...Nature pushes her call out as sweat/
Joe reaches the bottom floor but his portable chruch is gone...
Worried Joe must find a place to repalce Pastor John/

Its been a long day for Joe...oh how they did him so wrong...
Johns not at the work site...Joe's been holding his breath so long/
He's beginning to question faith...searching for his porcelian god...
hoping Nature made a mistake...and that this call is a fraud/
in the distance Joe spots John hidden behind a wall...
hurriedly he walks ready to answer Nature's call/
and when he reaches his destiny... and his Lord is unvieled...
Joe is Faced with only Two Commandments: "Un-Zip" and "Exhale"


Ehhhh.......Pretty good for Liquid Breathe...
HAHAHAA LMFAO I think this is funny.........

Umm...if u don't get it you are an idiot

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