Bribe... some pretty good lines... well let me not say that... you had some lines... that could have been fuckin hot... and I mean FUCKIN HOT... like the plot line... you could have flipped that... not bad... not bad at all... just a few things to learn naw mean..? how to set up punches... like the opener than the break after that..? what was that... NEVER DO THAT... Could have played his name more like...

I killin this kids lucky charms to seem him fell,
this dude is fruity loops... if he don't think I kill cereal...

naw mean..?

work on rhyme scheme also...

Cer


some good lines here and there... could have been more... you should have tried if you didn't... and if you did you should have tried harder... your lines were PLAYED... and you're from Jersey..? That fuckin disappoints me... Snap into you like a slim jim..? My god...




vote: Bribe...



That based solely on potential lines... that neither of you lived up to...