Meta one :
meadskillz?, (pause) be honest dog you need skillz
you must get off flirtin' wit' death, and this battle is another one of your cheap thrills//
Medium Opener, I like the flirtin with death part but the first line and the end should have been more tight
but this time you ain't gonna survive cause i'm too complex for you
fuck your verse, start workin' on your DE-composition cause this shit right here is the death of you
Medium, Not to strong but not bad
fuck your vehicle, i'm stealin' your whole soul in less than 60 seconds
and leave you questionin' your physical presence cause of the sense of death that you're left with//
Some intelectual shit not bad but wasn't really feeling it
imma lyrical surgeon the way I operate wit' percision
and your persistence at spittin' is pathetic so just listen//
First line allready used quite some times but the 2nd is ok
there's a method to my madness and a madness to my methodolgy
but all your analogies are analogous to the subject of gonocolgy//(pussy)
Again some intelectual shit but this one was nice
so you better douche to clear your mind while I tie this noose around your ryhmes
let's be honest bitch, it was suicide to think your lines could HANG wit' mine//
Medium
dog, can't you tell Mind Theory is mentally disabled, you actually believe the hype?
you all over that crippled's dick like you Christopher Reeves' wife//
Ok
shit, i'll easily demonstrate that this battle ain't fair bitch, believe me
how can i not ELEVATE when all the HOT AIR you spit is BENEATH ME// (hot air rises)
This one is nice !
you're too simplistic, get beyond that "you a real lyricist" rhetoric
you sound like a diralect and your aussie dialect is puttin' me to sleep like a seditive//
Nice aswell
beefin' with this metaphysical individual, you just fucked yourself like a lonely hermaphrodite
as I rip apart your physical like a satanic ritual, i wonder if you'll still be a phony in the afterlife//
Very nice finisher
Meadskillz
Now this cats been straight "Duckin" me since he got here
Saw his first battle here in CAPITALS straight up that shit is queer/
Nice opener (Capital line is ill dog, dunno if he did his first battle in caps but this is hilarious
I can do this forever man, go "meta" for "meta"
Yo, I reckon if u versed my grandma, u couldn't even beat-her/
Wasn't really feeling it
Man I can't understand why yo call yourself a "physical one"coz I seen you at night
'DUCKIN' bonerakes chompin you up fo a fight
But then I was informed by one of your "homoboys" It was the pillow you bite/
Aight nice 3 lines, diversity = good
Think you all hardcore when you name yourself after a book/
You wanna Make this Intellectual, take it to chess, I'm the Queen and you the rook/
Nice punch to his intelectual shit !
I'm comin wit Mo Energy than the Sun and comin twice as hot/
I'm the dopest young cat here, yo man, you musta forgot/
Medium (almost tended to say weak)
Oi, dogg, I said, you can run but you can't hide, you ran fo "meta's" in your case/
Caught you, your progression, slow as the last runner in the 'NY Marathon race'/
Nice
Talkin shit about ma country dogg, bout as biga mistake as the words of 'Trent Lott'/
Claimin yourself as a supreme lyricist, you couldn't even take out 'Selwyn's' spot/
Ill !
Damn right, Simplicity is the name of ma game and im destroying you like Superman/
You spittin about as much 'fiction' trash as the 'Ku Klux Klan'/
Nice shit
I'm like a toilet yo, right here I'm wipin away 'your shit'/
I told ya before dogg, Like a camel, don't fuck with me or I'll spit/
But you wasn't listenin, bigger mistake than deaf people at a Comedy skit!!!!
Tight finisher
First I tought Meta took this one
After I read it twice I thought it was a TIE
Read it for a third time and analysed it and my
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