when i left i thought this site was done with all the freepostin i mean damn give the man some feedback so he can get better on his shit truthfully dude i'm not into this type of rhymes but still this shit was nice when you post this type of rhyme i can't really tell you to add anthing to it because it's one of those flows you write when somethin happened and it's not somethin you wrote to impress it's somethin you wrote to express, so i guess there's not too much left for me to say and i can't give a score on it anything so just keep postin until i can
aight
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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun