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Old 04-25-03, 01:19 PM   #5
oddly ill
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oh shit this cat got skills i read your other post and liked it and this one was even better more complex and the rhyme scheme was off the meters kid you i would say get better but if you do you'll show me up and i don't i want that so keep doin what you're doin

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun
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