Thread: "Only With You"
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Old 04-25-03, 08:18 PM   #3
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Decent track dowg You need a little more emotion and hypeness i know this was a love track but you could have said it with more meaning you know what I mean. Just polish up your rhyme scheme and delivery some. Heartfelt lyrics though and that's a good thing


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