both your verses were nice ...but see everyone sees it different
to me its about word play,punches,metaphors,,,,,,,not who can rhyme with a nice flow,,,,,,,peep the name of this site RAPBATTLES,,,,,,,in other words u aint gonna go to "batte" just to look pretty, u in for the kill,,,,,,,,,but i have to give this one to Dejure,,,he was on point in every line it was the kinda stuff you read over twice....

thats my two cents,,,,,,,,

Vote=DeJureThaRaw

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