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Old 04-26-03, 02:40 AM   #10
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i aint into the gangsta side of things but it was aiight,your flow sounded a bit off to me,and a coupl eof lines didnt match i think A2Z pulled them up,also with the lines that a2z spoke of,get rid of one of the ats in the last line nahmean,no need for getting shot at at night nahmean,just gettin shot at night sounds tight.but anyway this was an aiight spit fiori keep elevating nahmean,peep my shit sometime in open mic.
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