yo i thought this was coo
bash had some creative lines
some nyce vocab flowed well
struture was pretty good
try not to use so many "likes" get A Lil More Creative

warfare i couldnt really feel yours
your strutcure was really bad
which threw the flow off
alot of lines i wasnt feeling
they were either to simplstic or were just wack

coo collab would have been better
if warfare held it down more