First off, let me just say, with no offence intended - your avater thing annoys me. Not very much, but just a bit. I remember playing that game when i went around my parents house and played it with my sister. It's annoying how they're always moving around like that, like 'retards' needing to take a piss, even when talking to someone or just doing nothing.

But anway, enough of that.

I liked the piece. Had a nice flow to it. A kind of deep, mellow emotional thing going on too.

End wa alright, but felt it maybe, just maybe, could've been better. But it's all good...

..resp...