Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
Bush could hardly say half those words because he has trouble pronouncing anything with more than one syllable.
Anyway, this peice of yours had a standard basicnicity about its format. Rhymes were okay. Imagry and stuff I had the idea of what you where trying to come across with.
And yes. Big brother is watching. He is right over my shoulder. Say hello.
~Shalom~
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