Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
First, I need to say, you are the shiznit. And I mean that in the best of ways.
Second, your avatar's dancing is creeping me out. And she looks like Sailor Jupiter or something.
And finally third, yes. Yes, in your heart I am in fact the reality. Poetry is always better when it is about me.
Sorry. I had to say that. In all seriousness though, this was a deep poem. It really does capture the feelings of painful love. I liked it. You really are good.
~Shalom~
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