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Old 04-27-03, 04:21 AM   #2
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nice spit dreamer.thought the flow was a bit off but it was still an ill spit,nice words and shit all the way through,try even the syllables in you r lines out so they sound more on beat whatever,shit sounds mad deep nahmean.

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nice,i aint into thte gangsta type shit but i really liekd htis peice,sounded like you actually meant what you were saying,plus it wasnt about guns and caddilacs and airforce ones and all that garbage...props for writing something different to the gangsta norm...


returnt he favour someitme cat...
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