Aiight, I give you props, that was decent, but let me do it like this here

O.G., I’m “impressed” by the rhymes that you “said-and-sent”//1
I “guessed” ‘writing (right-ing)’ makes up ‘wrongs’ due to your speech “impediment”//2
These people don’t know you in real life, they never heard you “speak”//3
It took you 3 hours to write those lines? Then to rap it, it would take you a “week”//4
Cuz y’all “seek-to-get-beat” when you try to “peep-this-technique”//5
I get my ‘machete’ out and leave your body pieces buried “deep-in-concrete”//6
Look, I already ‘cut you up’ and I am just getting “started”//7
Don’t blame me that your crack head mom made your brother “retarded”//8
I don’t get the “situations-you-bitin”, they just “plain-don’t-relate”//9
And don’t think your over use of “quotations-and-hyphens” can help “change-your-fate”//10
You should learn to count lines, you had “spit-to-much”//11
But remember its quality over quantity, beating you shouldn’t be a “bit-too-tough”//12
Because your failure is as obvious as the ‘nose’ on your “face”//13
You just ‘Odorous Garbage (O.G.)’, you can’t attempt to keep “pace”//14
You need to put the mic “back-down”, you ain’t no Panjabi “MC”//15
Your Indian “back-round” only makes it worse against this rap game “elite”//16
So put that ruby back in your “forehead”, and return to your “country”//17
You’ll just end up “more-dead”, cuz your homosexual lines can’t “punch-me”(punch lines)//18
Now it’s time for me to “wrap-it-up”, like I do a blunt before I “smoke-it”//19
Everyone will “laugh-it-up”, when they see how your pathetic style got “broken”//20