I think that sometimes it takes you too long to rhyme and other times you will rhyme twice and just move on to something and it dont have a nice flow to it....thats my opinion anyway....

"Leavin no time to prepare, like a nightmare leadin to a night scare,
On the mic I leave u pleadin, die if u try breathing,
I climb every step of the ladder until I’ve reached the summit,
And then plummet, to the bottom and climb back faster then u thought was ever possible,
U get anywhere near the top and pop-yo-skull"


The plummet summit part.