This is cool man, 1st nigga sound like Xzibit in the beginnin, iont see the pun part too much. This was aight, the hook was kinda cool, lil borin tho. This is aight tho, not bad, i like it, i like it. The second nigga was tight.

But yo, show some luv back nigga, peep my joints "immoral" and "All Eyez On Me" man, olla back.