na, thats kool man, at least u didn't take forever to spit....

well here we go.

helraizor, let me guess you're trying to sound demonic,
i bet you hit the floor after one puff of the chronic/
these rhymes are super-sonic, a new global sensation,
i'm fucking you up, whilst your stuck with masturbation/
lacking communication, a new rapbattles user...
homosexual abuser, they called me in to be a lyrical de-fuser/
holding a knife to your throat, don't slice until u choke,
once all yo blood has been drained out i'll snort it up like coke/

aight, lets git some votes....