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Old 04-30-03, 04:24 PM   #2
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pretty good stuff
i liked the :
I know u wack i heard the facts kid
every one of ur tracks get slept on like a certa matress

i bomb bitches like U.S. planes to serb lands
espionage in the studio i curve plans
big enough to kick the worlds so tell me when the earth lands

Overall:
Ok wordplay
good flow
some lines are too short
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