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IP:
I love these linez:
the glass smashed and everythign around the impact cracked,to shatter//
into ten thousand peices of sharded matter,and skattered,tattered//
and clattered into density cats was overwhelmed by the fracture,rap splatter//
facing directions uncertain,unbelievably thick smog curtain,throat an lungs jerkin//
heart workin ovetime to distingiush a lifesign,on that line,the train drives//
cats bomb the tracks and make the rail slide,capsize the locomotive//
expose the open dosage and snatch away the hope of a city losing focus//
This is a great piece...I'd comment more but I have to get off the library computer before they close...My computer's down that's why you haven't seen me...check my piece: This is Above your Heads...I'm spreadin' love ...Salaam
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