aight...tha whole braggin concept is played out,and it showed here.U had a nice lil flow but sum words didnt even rhyme:
"thats my imatation of violence in ya NIGHTMARES//
serve ya tonsils to a mongrel, make him shit on a field//
and wait for a million years to pick the remanding fossils//
them incinerate them with gas oil//"

didnt make too much sense eitha but if its ya style,work on it.Stay ^
-Avi