this was an alright piece it really started tellin the story but the way you ended it took that away. i thought that you could have added more to it to say somethin about the similarities of this and fake emcees just to get your point accross i mean the flow was good and so was the detail but the topic wasn't given justice but other than that it was ok

odd gives it
3 1/2 mics of 5

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