listenin.....


beats a lil grimey

U WERE OFF BEAT FOR A WHILE


ya flow isnt too origional, lyrics was mediocre....said a lot of shit thats been said too many times by industry rappers already

DUDE U need to put some heart n this, ENERGIZE YA FLOW

it sounded like u didnt even know where ya punches started n ended...JUS MEMORISE IT MORE

if u wrote it u might as well be able to freestyle it from memory
that way ya shit will hit harder, n u'll incorperate more of ya style into it...

practice makes perfect

keepp spittin