Blah, fuck this over emphasis of wack lines by using an asterisk. Cough OnE, cough.

Mind theory, although at times inconsistent. And not exactly the posterboy for creativity, you still won. Try not to stretch your wordplay; "Whale and Well". They sound nothing alike. A big distinction between the two.

Wordplay is;
Floorless/Flawless
Forfeiting/For fitting

Not -- Chump and Champ, or any other nearly similar spelt words. Put it this way, if the words were that similar would you really need to use the ( parenthesis ) to clarify your line?

Theres more to critique, but to be honest. Text makes me sick.