1. don't worry who they say ur trying to be like. it's better to rhyme every word than hardly any (like i saw above) try to elevate more, work on flow and punches. IE i think it shows skill if you can rhyme every word and have it make sense. also i wouldn't use the 'N' word. but then again that's my 2 cents.
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