thank God yo, i didnt hear eminems name in dere once....haha, four things gurl: 1. 1.worplay,2.metaphores,3.similies,4.vocabulary,
u improvin kid jus lik i said, keep postin ...peace eazy

ps dont eva use da ''N'' word again cos if u aint black, u aint spoused ta use dat word, and if u were freestylin in front of black people and u said dat shit, theyed fuck u up, badly,