Iight...Kinda a "newb" at freestylin but i'll let u decide on wut ya think...My 3rd verse ever...

If I died tomorrow, i'd be countin my blessings//
From the clothes I had on my back ta tha taste of "Ranch Dressing"//
My mom'd be obsessing since I wuz neva able ta pop that question//
But through all this shit, maybe i'd still be able to retreave tha lesson//
Deep in protestin, I didn't see I was bein a pest-n…//
….now afta it's too late, I realize ma mistake..//
It was like I was bein "kicked to tha side…//"
like havin someone cry in ya hear, "CHECKMATE"//
See, you on realize life's a virtue until it gets put in a "clutch…"//
… n "goes down" for tha "TWISTED FATE"//
Thas what's been happenin ta me…//
but only this time I won't be havin "Gods' good grace"//
Now, I'm takin a moment ta say my last goodbyes, "icein tha cake"//
End my life inna good way, sparrin my lil brotha of all his pain//
cas if I let him follow in my footsteps, i'd go insane//
Even when I heard this "news," I felt like I wuz havin a famine-to-tha-brain//
So, that's why i'm gonna make the best of my last hours, i've yet ta obtain//
Huggin everyone that helped me…//
…goin "down" the list as if i'm on some kinda crane//
It's a shame I thought life wuz juss bout tha power n the fame//
Takin tha world head on by yoself iz pretty lame…//
Believe that...n learn from my "mistake"...//
cas if I was livin longer, i'd probably still be doin tha same//
N look what's happen to me now...I may die tamorrow…//
n I sure as hell aint got no-other person, but-me ta blame//

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