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Old 05-02-03, 11:28 PM   #14
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i don't know if i can vote on this since i'm new but this is so on point, i feel like i need to let the both of y'all know.

logic, your shit was hostile perfect. it was so harsh, the vocab was simplistic but it hit the point 4real. the word play was hot but not as good as it coulda been...the end kinda dropped off, but overall, it was quite nice. i can't say too much about it, it doesn't need words.

lawz, i couldn't find your rhythm till like the 5th line cause you weren't rhymin internally and it wasn't flowin right off the bat like logic's did...it was like you tried 4 lines in pentameter but was that by mistake? you had the HOTTEST wordplay and "This aint a battle this is as funny as court jestures//When you make two come, that's when you get 'Jumped' by "Four Checkers" " lines were too hot...that got me. the end was stronger than logic's..overall, it was quite good, 4real

this is hard to vote on....but if it came down to it, i'd have to give it to logic cause yea, his end dropped off, but the whole flow didn't drop off till the end. lawz didn't pick it up till the middle, but the middle was crucial..

vote- lack of logic

that's my word

-bliss