in that short paragraph u ended 5 run on sentenses with cat, and 2 fragment sentences with dun, just to recap

let me learns ya sumthin,

dun ws used correctly,

however cat is meant to be used referin to some one " o thats one cool cat" " whos this cat" not meant directly, dog, is the corect term to be used, or niggam or g, or homeboy, please not cat