word, thats cool, first beats are always experimental

first one...i'd prolly use a different kick, the bongos when they came in were pretty good soundin...decent work with the strings...its not bad

second one...i like the melody over that loop that sounds pretty damn cool lol...that lil snare crash i'm not feelin too much in that drum loop...the mixing of the sample over the loop was a lil off at a certain spot but nonetheless good for starters

gotta agree with everyone else, you got the potential to do some damage...

keep em bangin