OK THIS IS WHAT MYSTAHBIGGS WROTE ...
YOU CAN CHECK IT AT

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ght=mystahbiggs

if u want...
but ill write it below also for him...


"this lil sucka name blaze just asked me to spit a verse
even tho its my first burst I'll spit a curse ta get my first merc
son you dont even wana see me spit in this way
feel like im batlin a boy band wit a name blaze2k
imma blaze my bullets in ya chest and leave ya jacket perforated
I'll have your shirt so red they'll say yo ass was marinated
c'mon blaze you couldn't even see me if you had a lookin glass
so keep stevie wonderin how this newbie just murdered yo ass
if you wana hard verse blaze, just read mine and quote
ya'll aint even gotta read his garbage just gimme da vote"


ok in my opionin he had a strong flow but repition killed him like with Yo Ass... and i think he needs to think just a lil bit harder, but my flows above at top of thread and his is in this message so please vote ... thanks alot

-keep it real - Blaze

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