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Originally posted by fgee
claim u have 'killa instinx' but u lack the 'finishing move', even if u had 'multiple domes' u couldnt create 'headline' news/( nice )
u couldn't have rhyme 'high-lights' if u climbed ladders to change 'bulbs', lacking bright sparks while my brains ideas bulge/( a lil strecthed )
climbing inside 'Einsteins' the only time u could be 'in-genius'/( nice )
u couldnt call 'money' shots if your motto was in 'god we trust' and u were a gun machinist/( ok )
call me a lyrical architect the way i'm building u up just to knock u down, my hardhits cause light weights like u to splatter when u hit the ground, a 'crunch in time' flattened on impact 'nestle-d' down/ ( was ok at first then just to streched)
probly say u get the ladies but gettin dick pics enlarged the only way u've been blown, face it u can't be my 'sucessor' cos ur 'air'(pun-heir) to the throne, mead can't 'wind' me by 'copying' if he was a 'cy-clone'/( ok )
with a poker trick up my sleeve my hands got u blushed, ur the king of toilets.....and u've just been royally flushed/(nice)
good to see 'mead' has a sense of humour though, cos sugesting he has 'skillz' is beyond a joke, this verse has a stranglehold on your throat, stoppin the blood flow make u choke, give u confidence issues from the ideas i provoke, u've just learnt a 'valuable lesson' cos i made u 'broke'/
(stretched )
overall your raps are shit which means u shit raps, so next time u visit the toilet u'll find notes in your craps........ (ok )
fgee 8 of 10 due to structure, multi'z, pucnhs, and metaphors
if u don't understand it don't vote
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Originally posted by Meadskillz
Errrheeemmmmm....Ready....Set.....Go!!!
A Part of a team of 'Production,' claiming they're RB's #1 crew and Oh MY GOD!!! they produce 100% text/(nice)
As his nerves kick in he realises there are 18 lines to go and his minds only starting to be perplexed/ ( nice )
Verbal supplements are loaded in my rhyming '9' hittin quicker than 'Wyatt Earp' at showdown/( ok )
Spits that split ya presence and leave gaps in ya shadows, tainted ya face, lookin like a clown/ (filler )
As 'time' ticks by, Fgee realises he is yet another 'cog,' in the 'clockworks' of KS Productions/ (filler )
Digits run round and in the calculation of win/loss ratio, your win %, results in reductions/( ok )
Comparitise your crews presence with that of ants, come in numbers but you contradict J5/**( i didnt get maybe to personal for me)
The Population of ya small net mass, overflowed with herbs, to bring FBI raids alive!!!!/( nice )
Attempted gangsta image, however, interpreted as insane like students of "Columbine"/( filler )
This kid seeks to canabolise on 'SARS' victims just so he has a chance to exert a pure 'Ill' line/ ( ok )
I'm ruining this cats "net-works" Mo than "Nokia" on a killing spree and its him gettin the fine/ ( nice )
As a "scot" he reveals what lies beneath his "kilt" pleads me to look, screamin "HERE'S JOHNNY!!" dog, I aint interested in ya figure down south/( nice til the last part )
The only "SHINING" coming from this cat is the gold in his shattered mouth/ ( ok )
I'm like the snow of winter as I house in this cat and freeze his intended alphabetic attacks/ ( nice )
Realising truth has you finding that in the 'corp' of your rhymes there are many 'fiction facts'/ ( ok )
Gee, I'm Just "Snoopin" around, send out a search party to find this "Doggs" flow/( ok )
Call the "Doctor," Coz he's testin my "patients" this battle will become a flaw in his carreer like "Eminems's Show"/( nice )
Simplicity in his rhymes had him reaching for the "cocktionary" in search of advanced terms/ ( ok )
In his own mind he holds thoughts he is God, however he couldn't put me in a "whirl" if his rhymes were "perms"/(ok )
As an MC, this kid could be in "Manhattan" and still never be "Maid"..If this was a relationship, he's just been played..........(nice )
i give u a 8.5 cuz i thought ur beginnin was the nicest bars in this battle sorry fgee but this was defintly a battle to remeber
**(J5's New Album is "Power in Numbers) P.S. DON'T vote if you don't get the personals & or punches!!!!
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